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Robert Cosmar - Astrologer's avatar

Beautiful and sensuous poem with a touch of lustful desire. We all long to feel love and oneness. Poetry is a cry from deep within us to become more whole. Ty for being the love of my life.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you for your beautiful comments. You always make my day brighter because you are in it. I love you, too ❤️

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C. Mercaldi-Cotton's avatar

A hot poem and a simmering exchange--Should I be listening in on this? ;-))

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C.J. Heck's avatar

(laughing) It was part of a poetry challenge years ago. A fun write actually. Thank you for commenting, Connie!

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Robert Cosmar - Astrologer's avatar

You complete me and have taught me to become a better man.

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Love this, very sensual

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you, Kathleen, and for the restack, too.

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Simone Senisin's avatar

“Lust and fire burn in his heart”; great line C.J 💝

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Glad to hear it, Simone, and thank you!

My favorite line is: “Word-foreplay making me want him,”

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Simone Senisin's avatar

Yes, words can definitely do that 🥰

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