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Megan Youngmee's avatar

loving that you write about humanity in all its forms from the seedy underbelly of prostitution to the beauty of children. always with compassion for the person and of course wit.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Oh Megan, thank you so much. I love people —all kinds of people. I have always been a people watcher and I wonder and imagine what their lives might be like. hugs

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David Angel's avatar

You made me cry. How do you do that?

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Hello David. I wish I could take credit, but it’s your heart and your feelings, and both are beautiful.

Thank you for your restack! I hope that means you enjoyed my short story. You’re very sweet to do that.

hugs and love

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David Angel's avatar

Thanks CJ! Give yourself credit! I spend hours on Substack every day and this is the first time a writer hit me that hard. Superbly done!

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Now it’s my turn to thank you, David. That’s a beautiful compliment and I appreciate it.

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Elizabeth Grace Martinez's avatar

i like this cozy story.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you, Elizabeth.

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Annette kimball's avatar

You described a lifetime in a short and poignant story! A very talented writer my dear! I will subscribe👍

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you for your kind comments and for subscribing, Annette.

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Simone Senisin's avatar

I thought the shadow through the smoke might have been an angel, nice she was treated with compassion by one of her regulars.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

That would have been a nice and very different ending. Thanks, Simone! Maybe next Christmas she could have that happen (giggle-laugh-snort) 🤣🤣🤣😁😁

hugs and love

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Simone Senisin's avatar

🤣😇😉

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