A Poem, by C.J. Heck
Ooh! I feel this one in my bones. You turn feelings into ink and breath into longing. The emotions ache and claw to be set free. Keep them coming. 🙏❤️
Thank you, Jamie. You just made my day …
❤️
C.J., the diction in your poem manages to be both rich and austere.
Hello Bob. Considering what I’ve always thought austere means (stern, unfeeling, or harsh), I don’t know whether you like the poem or you hate it.
Oh well. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
I liked the poem very much, and meant that your poem achieved depth through natural, straightforward use of language that shunned artifice. Here's part of a definition for austere:
markedly simple or unadorned
//an austere office
//an austere style of writing
Thank you for clarifying the meaning you used for austere. I am glad you liked it.
I can feel this one too CJ ❤️
beautiful poem from the woman I love and adore.
Awwww, Thank you. I love and adore you, too, sweet man. ❤️
Ooh! I feel this one in my bones. You turn feelings into ink and breath into longing. The emotions ache and claw to be set free. Keep them coming. 🙏❤️
Thank you, Jamie. You just made my day …
❤️
C.J., the diction in your poem manages to be both rich and austere.
Hello Bob. Considering what I’ve always thought austere means (stern, unfeeling, or harsh), I don’t know whether you like the poem or you hate it.
Oh well. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
I liked the poem very much, and meant that your poem achieved depth through natural, straightforward use of language that shunned artifice. Here's part of a definition for austere:
markedly simple or unadorned
//an austere office
//an austere style of writing
Thank you for clarifying the meaning you used for austere. I am glad you liked it.
I can feel this one too CJ ❤️
beautiful poem from the woman I love and adore.
Awwww, Thank you. I love and adore you, too, sweet man. ❤️