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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Flash fiction story, full of courage and faith

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you for restacking this story, Kathleen. It’s one of my favorites.

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Deborah T. Hewitt's avatar

Dear God, I was gulping for air. Thank God the boy ran... wow. Incredible piece of flash fiction C.J. ✨

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you very much, Deborah. I’m so happy you enjoyed it. 😊

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Connie J. Casella's avatar

Great story but did the guy get out? Did help arrive? And what happened to the boy? Or is there a part two for the rest of the story?

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C.J. Heck's avatar

That's flash fiction, Connie --very short fiction. Jack saved the boy's life when he honked his horn. That made he boy run., but the horn also caused the landslide to start Jack's last dying thought was, "Thank God, the boy ran." Jack died, but he saved he boy.

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Connie J. Casella's avatar

Great story anyway!

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