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Frederick Fullerton's avatar

Good story, CJ!

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you, Frederick. Were you surprised by the ending?

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Frederick Fullerton's avatar

No, I saw where the story was heading, but I still liked it.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you again!

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Joan Stommen's avatar

I didn’t see it coming either…I always look for happy endings! Great story… so well written! ☺️🫶👍

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C.J. Heck's avatar

I love surprises … and I love that my story surprised you, Joan! (grin)

Thank you for your kind words —you’ve touched me deeply!

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Simone Senisin's avatar

Hi C.J, ouch 😣… didn’t see that coming.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Was that a gotcha? (wink)

Thank you, Simone

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Simone Senisin's avatar

Yes 🙌 😝

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you!

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Jo-Ann Petrarca's avatar

Nice twist CJ

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you, Jo-Ann! I’m glad you read it to the end!

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Now I didn’t see that…. Well written. ❤️

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you, Brenda! That means a lot, hearing you didn’t see that coming.

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

I was so into it and enjoying your descriptive write and then…. What? I love ending like that.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

That makes me happy, Brenda! Thank you so much.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you for restacking this story, @Robert Cosmar - Astrologer 💋💋💋

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Thank you for the restack, @Frederick Fullerton

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